It hurts me..

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Why does she continue to chase that blue bastard?
Why does she crave for the dust he leaves behind for her good riddance?
Why can't she see that he's too Free to be loved?
Why?Why does she ignores this?
The pain,the sadness..this sickens my heart...

Too many times have she cried for his love
Too many times have she's been rejected
Too many times have she been...unloved
What she offers is stronger than his so called Freedom

This time he made those feelings permanent
With the hit of a falling acorn
He stops in his tracks
Taking time out of his free life to bask in her beauty
Thus trampling a Rose;Withering it in the process..

He takes off with her
While the withering Rose dies from heartbreak
Her petals blew away in the wind
and so does her love
Only to be collected and healed by a mysterious darkness

Gathering every petal he could find
and putting them together in one peace for good
A new Rose was formed;even more beautiful than before
He promised to Love her,keep her and become one with her

So he did
"It hurts me..",She said,"His lies..His-".
"Never will I do that my flower..
Never will I leave you to feed on my dust that I leave behind.."
"Never will I forgive myself if I do..",The darkness said.
"So kiss me,and true love will be found"...



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